Hotatory Exposition Text

HOTATORY EXPOSITION TEXT
“bard and pickers”

THESIS

I  personally think that bard and pickers give many bad effects, not only for them self but also the other people.Why do I say that?

ARGUMENT

1.They don’t good get education,so they increase the number of poverty.                                            

      By don’t get  good education,they can’t get good job. So,they can’t improve their lives.Their lives will be as it continues, will not change for better.And it means that they increse the number of poverty.

2.They can deterioret the beauty of city.   

     Pickers by build their house near  the rood, under bridge and in side railroad and bard usually ask much money to driver and ask  money at people in the traffic lights at red light, they can disturb and deterioret the beaube ty of city.

3.They can increse the number of criminality.

     They can do anything if they can’t to fullfil their life. Such as stealing and picking pockets, to the most resiously such as robber and kill.So, they can threaten other people’s life. 

RECOMMENDATION

we should provide free training so that they can open their own business, we should provide good education, so we can open job vacation and we can help other people to work in our business.